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This is my writing based on toad in a hole example

Sometimes on a weekend when the sun was sitting we would have a BBQ. On the  BBQ we would have chicken, kebabs, sausage and bread,chips With some fizzy.

Dad would get me to go get  the sausages from the freezer and put them on the BBQ. It would take  about 10 mins until done. But when they Dad was done cooking he would call out.

“Dinners ready”.

By Lachlan N

 

 

 

3 thoughts on “This is my writing based on toad in a hole example

  1. Frances Campbell

    I love how you have used the model so well. I was a bit confused about the sun sitting? Did you mean setting? Or was the sun sitting at the table?
    I can just hear Dad calling out to you when the BBQ is finished. Keep up the great writing Lachie.
    From Mum

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